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Talk Dirty to Me: Dialogue
4 min readJun 19, 2020
We’ve spent a lot of time this month talking about narrative. Let’s take a moment to review the other half of the writing in your script: Dialogue.
Here are simple tips on how to create good dialogue and common pitfalls to avoid while trying to give a believable and distinct voice to your characters.
In the book The Tools of Screenwriting, by David Howard and Edward Mabley, the authors highlight ten things that dialogue must accomplish:
- It must characterize the speaker and perhaps the person addressed.
- It must be idiomatic, maintaining the individuality of the speaker, yet still blend into the style of the screenplay as a whole.
- It must reflect the speaker’s mood, convey their emotion, or provide some window into their inner life.
- It must often reveal the speaker’s motivation or an attempt to hide their motivation.
- It must reflect the relationships of the speaker to the other characters.
- It must be connective, that is, grow out of a preceding speech or action and lead into another.
- It must advance action.
- It must sometimes carry information or exposition.
- Often it must foreshadow what is to come.
- It must be clear and…