Structure Breakdowns: Whiplash

Script Genius
4 min readSep 1, 2020

WHIPLASH, the Academy Award winning movie written and directed by Damien Chazelle is one of my favorites. A tense game of psychological warfare between a talented pupil and vicious teacher transforms into a fascinating character study and meditation on what it takes to achieve artistic greatness.

LOGLINE: Plagued by the failed writing career of his father, an ambitious young jazz drummer hungers day and night to become one of the greats at an elite east coast music conservatory.

When an instructor equally known for his terrifying teaching methods transfers the aspiring drummer into his band, the drummer’s passion for perfection spirals into obsession, as his ruthless teacher pushes him to the brink of his ability — and his sanity.

THE NORMAL WORLD (ACT I):

Who is the MAIN CHARACTER?

Andrew Neiman, 19, an aspiring drummer at America’s most prestigious music conservatory.

What is the main character’s INITIAL WANT?

He wants to become the greatest living jazz drummer and reap the rewards of that achievement.

What is the INCITING INCIDENT that sets the story in motion?

The school’s top conductor, Terrence Fletcher invites Andrew to join the school’s top band.

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